Rising Sign

22 10 2008

You’ve completed me time and time again,
Then came to me.
Without you I could not have changed my fate
And shared such free
Universal bonds of affections,
Over seas,
Beyond the eternal chaos of space
To where time and space have no real place.
badastronomy

Copyright 5/2008


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25 10 2008
spiffymcpantsman

I really like the last line here, the internal rhyme does wonders. It’s very powerful.

26 10 2008
dreamyst

Thank you, spiffy. :)

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